Enchanted

Do you know this movie? This movie is Disney picture movie. So, it was very interesting. And, Charactors are cutes!especially chipmunk is very very cute. This movie is strange story because main charactors shoot reality from fantasy. So, they know various things.

This movie give us love and bonds of friendship. And, this movie can excite for people.

( story)

zizel is pricess in fantasy. So, she wait that appear her prince in the future. One day, she met her prince and decied married tomorrow. That day, zizel head to castle because she married with prince. But, appear witch front her. The witch told her that can grant her hope. zizel speak her hope. Suddenly, witch get bewitch to her. Zizel shoot reality from fantasy but she not notice. And, she wander in city. Alittle girl and her father help Zizel. But, They feel Zizel is strange girl because she can speak with animal and she always has dream of fantasy. A little girl 's father name is Robert. He don't believe that fantasy and dream. He changes him think when he spent with Zizel.

After few days, Prince Edward,Pip and Edward's attendant shoot reality from fantasy because of help Zizel. They search her but they can't find her. At last Edward found her. But, Zizel don't back home. Zizel become like Robert. So, she felt don't leave.

Suddenly, witch appar ahead her again. And, she give apple that get her wish. But, it into poison. So, Zizel fall. but, Robert help her. All at once , witch change the big dragon. And, dragon remove him. Zizel go to help him. And, she help Robert. Finarry, zizel and Robert married. And, everyone become happyend.

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BR: Men in Black

（Story）
Edwards is police man in New York. One day, he caught the alien. But he can’t believe about fact because alien appeared in New York. When he met alien, The man appeared Edwards. The man’s name is key. He work that regulate about alien. Key had feel interest Edwards. So, he wants to work with Edwards. And, Key advice him about he take test at MIB. MIB is men in black. So, Edwards pass the test. When he pass the test, key talk about MIB and alien. Edwards work at MIB with Key.
The first work for Edwards is help expectant woman of alien. So, The alien pregnant and came along the alien baby. Edwards was very surprise but he help her. So, the alien baby born.

Next work is find Bug alien in New York. The bug is very violent alien and Bug hunt for Orion. Orion is very important because Orion has cosmic space. But, Bug can’t find it yet. Key and Edwards met a woman. The woman is coroner. Her name is Laurel. They talk about a man who die an accidental death. The man is alien. But, she don’t know alien. However, she has interest alien. And, she stays with a cat. Key and Edwards hide of fact alien. Suddenly, Bug take away her and cat. Key and Edwards run after an alien. At last, Bug find Orion. Orion is cat’s collar. Bug has UFO. Key and Edwards find Bug and fight it. But, Bug is very strong. However, they win and help her and save Orion. Key asked Edwards that forget everything. And, Key lose memory. Edwards start new life in MIB with Laurel. So, she entered MIB.


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This story is very very interesting. I like this story. This story became a movie. When I was young child, I watch the movie on TV at first. So, I felt interesting! And, the characters are good and funny.
This story gives us friendship and love. I like duo of key and Edwards. And I often watch movie on DVD. So, this movie is my favorite’s movie. This movie has continuance story. It is very interesting and funny. It is “men in black2”.

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BR: stories of Mermaids

(Story)
Harmony is mermaid. So, she lived with her mother at the very bottom of the ocean. One day, Harmony’s mother becomes sick. And, Harmony rushed to find Dr. Finlety. Dr. Finley is doctor in ocean. He give her one advice. She go to search medicine. At last, she found it. Suddenly, a terrifying figure appeared from nowhere. It was Gingerbeard’s ghost. And, he shut her into a room. Harmony was very sad. So, she tried to cheer herself up by singing. Harmony’s lovely voice floated around Gingerbeard’s ship. But, she keep on singing. So, ghost had had enough. He asked her. “Please just go home and take this chest with you.” Harmony take out medicine. Her mother recovered quickly.

(remark)
This story is good. And, this book wrote another story. It was very interesting. So, When I was young child, I read another mermaid story. I like it. It becomes movie at Disney picture. But, this story is funny and happy story. And character was cute.


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Favorite movie The Chronicles of Narnia: Prince Caspian

Last Saturday, I watched this movie on DVD. This movie is fantasy. I like this series. This story was very good and large scals. I wont to watch on movie theater but I was very busy. So, I didn't watch on movie theater. Therefore, I rent this movie at rental shop. The characters are cute and active. I think that this movie has a lot of things. And it gave us various things. For example, enterprise, bond of sibling, love and so on. When I watched this movie, I feel good story because this movie has love of family and help each other. If the story follow, I wont to go to movie. (129words)

BR -The Go-kart Race

(story)
Wilma and Biff saw a notice. It was about a go-kart race. They told their mother about the go-kart race. So, mother found the old go-kart and she gave it them. But, it was broken and rusty. They got a shock. One day, Biff told her father about the race. He looked at the old go-kart and he said. “we can make a new one!” So, they start that make a new go-kart. Everyone wanted to help. Biff and mother looked at the plans. At last, they made a new go-kart. Everyone looked at the new go-kart and bepleased at success. Biff try the new go-kart. “It’s brilliant!” she said. Suddenly, they found the girl who got a go-kart too. The girl is their friend. Her name is Anneena. Anneena take part in go-kart race too. And they try race but Anneena’s go-kart crashed into a upset. But, the mums and dads made a new go-kart for Anneena.
On the race day, everyone was excited. It was time for the race. The go-karts raced down the hill. But, Anneena didn’t win and Biff didn’t win too. Anneena was very depressed because she want to win the race. However, she got prize because her go-kart was very good.

This book is very interesting and wrote easy English. So, I thought that can read soon. And I like this series. The characters has active and adventure.
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Happy Age Day!!

Today, I coming of Age Day. So, I wear Firisode. In the morning, I went to beauty salon and I set hair and make up. Next, I dressing of frisode. My frisode color is yellow. So, I like my furisode. So, I went to hall that ceremony. But, When I go to therer, a lot of people assemble there. So, I was suprised. And, I saw my friends in high school days after a long separation. I felt happy!

Then, we went to high school and met my teacher. I took picture with my friends and teacher. And, we eat lunch and talk about various things. For example, high school memory, life of university and so on.

When I back home, my family celebrate the 20old Age Day for me. And, we ate good foods. It was very taste and delicious. I spend happy day and special day. I feel that I become grown up.
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Future events

After graduation from university, I will work about tour. So, I will become tour conductor. In enter company, I will get training because to remember how to work. And, I'll be full fledged. And, I go to overseas and guide for people. So, I will work very hard and enjoy leading tours. As a traveling tour conductor I get about a lot. And, I want to give enjoy tours for a lot of people in the future.

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WE : 2-01 English Website Cookie

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Portfolio for Writing IV,
Section 1a OR 1c

[Please delete the unsuitable class section and "OR" (above), along with this line of remarks.]

(See: Note 1, below)

0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, Words, and More

(See: Note 2, below.)

[Please embed your proto-portfolios here; then remove this line of remarks, including the square brackets.]

1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below.)

Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).

1.1. Showcase	Short titles with links	Dates yy.mm.dd	¶	W	C	L	P	M
Website review 08.09.29 (375+ words)	WE : 2-01 English Website Cookie	208.9.29		387	3	1	2
Favorite place(-s) 08.10.20 (450+ words)	My favorite Place Disney Land	2008.10.18		461	1		2
Mrs. Doubtfire 08.11.04 (500+ words)	Mrs. Doubtfire	2008.11.3		280	7		2
Community life 08.11.17 (default length*)	work friends -a my part-time job	2008.11.15		215
Kumamoto's best-kept secrets 08.12.01 (5+ ¶¶)	little known aspect of Kumamoto	2008.12.01		274			3
Learning with computers 2008.12.15 (6+ ¶¶)	learning with computers	2008.12.15		282			1
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Key:

¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length

W: number of words

C: number of comments

L: number of links

P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post
*: "long enough to cover the ... [communities] you choose," Writing Studio Blog, Preparation for Next Essays, 2008.10.29)

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• [Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets, then identify your best essay, and write out your reasons for selecting it here.]
  

2.0. Comments

Showcase	Titles of posts with links	Dates of comments yy.mm.dd	Numbers of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*
2.4. Most comments on:	Titles of posts with link	Dates of posts yy.mm.dd	Total number of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---		---	---
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---
2.4.2. Any of your other posts*
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---		---	---
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---

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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.

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2.6. Additional reflections on comments

• [Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then write out your reflections on both giving and receiving comments here.]
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3.0. Book Reviews

3.1. Showcase	Short titles with links	Dates (yy.mm.dd)	Words	Comments
Example:	Vampire Killer	07.05.16	39	1
2-01	Elmo Says ACHOO!!	08.10.05	147
2-02	Big Fat Cat goes to town	08.10.07	557
2-03	The mummy returns	08.11.25	535
2-04	Key Trouble	08.12.16	550
2-05	The jigsaw puzzle	09.1.6	450
2-06	The Go-kart Race	09.1.14	235
2-07	stories of Mermaids	09.1.15	205
2-08	Men in Black	09.1.20	490
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Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).

3.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• [Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then identify your best book review, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]

4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media

Showcase	Yes	No
4.1. Does your blog display an archive?	Y
4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?	Y
4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?	Y
4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?		N
4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?	Y
5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):	---	---
"books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)	Y
"essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")	Y
"quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)		N
"links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)	Y
"movies" (plural) AND "websites" (plural)	Y
"brainstorms" (or "brainstorming"), "essay prep.," AND "free-writing" (or "free-writes")		N
4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?	Y
How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts? ___ other labels attached to three or more posts	---	---
Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below. www (n) xxx (m) yyy (o) zzz (p) ...	---	---
4.3. Links & media	---	---
4.3.1. Does your blog include photos or other graphics?	Y
Does your blog profile include a photo or graphic representation?		N
How many of your blog posts this semester include photos or other graphics? ___ posts including photos or other graphics	---	---
4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?	Y
How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links? ___ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)	---	---
4.3.3. Does your blog include other media?	Y
How many of your blog posts this semester include other media? ___ posts including other media	---	---
What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list the kinds here: ... ... ...	---	---
What media content that you originally produced, if any, do your blog posts for this semester contain? Please list and explain each item briefly, and add short links and dates (yy.mm.dd) for reference. ... (short link, date) ... (short link, date) ... (short link, date)	---	---

4.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.

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5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing on it

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6.0. Advice and suggestions for yourself, your peers, and your successors

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BR The jigsaw puzzle

(story)
One day, The children were fed up and bored because it was raining. They want to play with the Frisbee. So, Mum come enter in room. She has a new jigsaw puzzle and give them it. Biff said. “It’s a good idea.” So, everyone play the jigsaw puzzle. In the end, everyone got bored. Suddenly, the magic key began to glow. And they went to another world. The magic took the children to a time long ago. It some children were playing soccer with their mother and father. Kipper looked at the them and he said. “They look like the children in the picture on the jigsaw puzzle.” So, kipper spoke to them. Their’s name are Jane and Edmund. They play Frisbee with Jane, Edmund and thir father and mother. Suddenly, A man ran towards Edmund’s father. The man is servant in Edmund’s house. He said. “Quickly, you must hide. The soldiers are coming!” Edmund’s father ran inside because he has been pursued by the soldiers. Everyone ran into the house. The soldiers came to the house and knocked on the door. But, there was no response. So, the soldiers into the house. Edmund’s father hide in secret room. Jane said. “They will kill my father if they find him.” The soldiers looked everywhere, but they couldn’t find him. Chip think of good idea. So, he said. “Maybe your father could escape,if he dressed up as a woman.” Biff and Anneena had an idea too. And, Biff and Anneena invited the soldiers that to play Frisbee. They played with it for a long time. Suddenly, an old woman came up. Edmund’s father transform old woman. But, the soldiers not notice. The old woman left away. One of the soldiers looked at the house. One old woman run. They chased off after the woman. The soldiers thought they had caught Edmund’s father. But, it was a trick. He was servant. So, the magic key began to glow and they come back. Mum looked at some thing in the picture. “That’s funny.” She said.

I like this series. So, this story is very good and wrote easy English. I can read soon. This series has interesting and advencher.
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