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One day, The children were fed up and bored because it was raining. They want to play with the Frisbee. So, Mum come enter in room. She has a new jigsaw puzzle and give them it. Biff said. “It’s a good idea.” So, everyone play the jigsaw puzzle. In the end, everyone got bored. Suddenly, the magic key began to glow. And they went to another world. The magic took the children to a time long ago. It some children were playing soccer with their mother and father. Kipper looked at the them and he said. “They look like the children in the picture on the jigsaw puzzle.” So, kipper spoke to them. Their’s name are Jane and Edmund. They play Frisbee with Jane, Edmund and thir father and mother. Suddenly, A man ran towards Edmund’s father. The man is servant in Edmund’s house. He said. “Quickly, you must hide. The soldiers are coming!” Edmund’s father ran inside because he has been pursued by the soldiers. Everyone ran into the house. The soldiers came to the house and knocked on the door. But, there was no response. So, the soldiers into the house. Edmund’s father hide in secret room. Jane said. “They will kill my father if they find him.” The soldiers looked everywhere, but they couldn’t find him. Chip think of good idea. So, he said. “Maybe your father could escape,if he dressed up as a woman.” Biff and Anneena had an idea too. And, Biff and Anneena invited the soldiers that to play Frisbee. They played with it for a long time. Suddenly, an old woman came up. Edmund’s father transform old woman. But, the soldiers not notice. The old woman left away. One of the soldiers looked at the house. One old woman run. They chased off after the woman. The soldiers thought they had caught Edmund’s father. But, it was a trick. He was servant. So, the magic key began to glow and they come back. Mum looked at some thing in the picture. “That’s funny.” She said.
I like this series. So, this story is very good and wrote easy English. I can read soon. This series has interesting and advencher.
(450words)
One day, The children were fed up and bored because it was raining. They want to play with the Frisbee. So, Mum come enter in room. She has a new jigsaw puzzle and give them it. Biff said. “It’s a good idea.” So, everyone play the jigsaw puzzle. In the end, everyone got bored. Suddenly, the magic key began to glow. And they went to another world. The magic took the children to a time long ago. It some children were playing soccer with their mother and father. Kipper looked at the them and he said. “They look like the children in the picture on the jigsaw puzzle.” So, kipper spoke to them. Their’s name are Jane and Edmund. They play Frisbee with Jane, Edmund and thir father and mother. Suddenly, A man ran towards Edmund’s father. The man is servant in Edmund’s house. He said. “Quickly, you must hide. The soldiers are coming!” Edmund’s father ran inside because he has been pursued by the soldiers. Everyone ran into the house. The soldiers came to the house and knocked on the door. But, there was no response. So, the soldiers into the house. Edmund’s father hide in secret room. Jane said. “They will kill my father if they find him.” The soldiers looked everywhere, but they couldn’t find him. Chip think of good idea. So, he said. “Maybe your father could escape,if he dressed up as a woman.” Biff and Anneena had an idea too. And, Biff and Anneena invited the soldiers that to play Frisbee. They played with it for a long time. Suddenly, an old woman came up. Edmund’s father transform old woman. But, the soldiers not notice. The old woman left away. One of the soldiers looked at the house. One old woman run. They chased off after the woman. The soldiers thought they had caught Edmund’s father. But, it was a trick. He was servant. So, the magic key began to glow and they come back. Mum looked at some thing in the picture. “That’s funny.” She said.
I like this series. So, this story is very good and wrote easy English. I can read soon. This series has interesting and advencher.
(450words)
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